Admiral Invincible uploaded on Amazon
I just uploaded Admiral Invincible onto amazon so in about 12 hours its going to be up and available for sale! For those of you who got to read the beta version you’re really going to enjoy the new epilogue.
The Deposed King
10 comments
chris - January 23, 2015 11:57 pm
I think you books are great but could you give us update on any further Falon Rankin books (The Boar knife etc’) as this is a great series to continue.
Wakabam47 - January 24, 2015 7:06 am
Bought and downloading now! Can’t wait to read up on the Little Admiral!
Paul - February 3, 2015 7:30 am
Hi, I am a big fan of your Admiral novels and have read them all. While the books are great, I often notice typos and other minor errors.
I usually am too lazy to do anything about it, but for this latest book I decided to note most of them down. The location numbers in the front correspond to the location of the pages on the kindle reader.
Let me know if this is some help to you or if I should not bother for the next book.
Waiting for your next book,
Paul
214 that’s [THE] very [uppercase words are the missing pieces]
358 “And a skeleton crew of hastily trained replacement crew?” [And a skeleton crew of hastily trained men?]
371 Brigade out [OF] here.
482 “We are after having many extra ion grenades,” [Just Glue’s confusing talk? or needs a rewrite]
495 Readings such as so, [get rid of ‘so’]
543 and fuming will help thingS.
586 spoke, finally jumped to his feet, and knocked over the chair [rewrite to “finally jumped to his feet, knocking over his chair, and spoke.”]
684 that particular thoughT,
711 conversation that was that I had yet to participate in. [get rid of ‘that was’]
746 already!.” [get rid of ‘.’]
757 fought my way [to] victory
762 Hadn’t I rescued her first, [I] asked myself.
794 wellness check so before we go [get rid of ‘so’]
1038 even if all they were where [even if they were only]
1562 what we do [TO] the droids
1589 “When he needs it then all he has to do is ask for it then,” [no need for the second ‘then’]
1608 how coming [TO] their aid
2061 Captains, CommodoreS and Admirals were
2071 muttered [A] Commander in
2087 “We had a unit it in [should be ‘in it’]
2105 the scatte[RE]d applause withered
2163 “Just because a Captain isn’t riding a Battleship doesn’t mean he can’t—,” star[T]ed the Lieutenant
2188 ‘Confederation’ funds we’d liberated from Mu-Heracles. [Shouldn’t this be Aqua Nova]
2224 who swore and oath [AN oath]
2568 we must move to end this conflict quickly, which will not happen if the humans of these Sectors are defeated!” [why would Tremblay despair at this? Did you mean ‘not defeated’?]
2579 If the DroidS arrive
2587 are [NOT] brought sharply to heel,”
2711 on continual the lookout for [get rid of ‘the’]
2808 And, by that, by ‘we’ I mean the MSP. [And, by that ‘we’, I mean the MSP.]
2973 derision from the Laurent. [get rid of ‘the’]
3030 reconcile myself to [A] certain level
3095 to meet in on [get rid of ‘in’]
3106 I sat for a moments [moment]
3108 I shortly. [I said]
3380 damageD stragglers
3565 passing interest as [TO] what was
3765 due [TO] the data limits
3805 right the nit was [right now it was]
3816 they to ensure that [they must ensure that]
3985 that as that; [that was that]
4038 take us right to [THE] enemy,
4193 this area was filled [BY] a large variety
4246 I would be [I wouldn’t be]
4339 them replaced the [them replace the]
4416 pierced to the [get rid of ‘to’]
4565 crewmen lead up [crewmen leading up]
5047 I [FELT] the weight of everything that had happened
5049 ‘trained’ [BY] a droid
5332 just [HOW] thin
5380 my chance of subject [my change of subject]
5814 her [TO] turn [AND] look back
6002 [LET] that treacherous Officer
6344 It will take the droidS hours
6406 we’ll only need [TO] use
6486 “It may have been [SOME] time coming,
6496 beneath his feel [FEET] lit up,
KTnTX - February 4, 2015 5:46 pm
I enjoyed the new addition. I like how Tracto is becoming the land of misfit toys.
Paul - February 4, 2015 10:21 pm
I am a big fan of your admiral novels. I took the time to note down most of the typos in your latest novel. Unfortunately I keep getting an error when trying to use your “Contact Us” application.
I tried posting the list to this blog comment section but it has been awaiting ‘moderation’ for quite some time. I suspect this is due to the length of the list. Please let me know how I can get this information to you.
The Deposed King - February 8, 2015 2:50 am
I’m glad you enjoyed it.
The Deposed King
Harlequin - February 20, 2015 3:14 pm
Haven’t got around to reading the new book yet. Been too busy with other things. I was wondering if you knew if you were going to be working on the sequel to “The Painting” next? Or is this too soon to be asking.
Harlequin - February 20, 2015 6:47 pm
In the middle of reading Admiral Invincible. But I must be worn out from trying to make headway through Wildbow’s “Worm” webnovel series, and his “Pact” series the past few days.
Wakabam47 - February 26, 2015 9:51 pm
Just wondering but are you working on the Admiral or will you working another side story or the witch guard story?
Joshua Wachter - March 31, 2015 2:48 am
Sorry for the late reply guys, it’s just taken a while to get this site fully transferred over.
Anyway on the production front I’m about half way done with Spineward Sectors Book 8 either going to be Admiral’s War or Admiral’s Challenge. As for the Witch Guard I really want to get another book in that series out this year but I’m just not sure when I’m going to get to it. I promised Chris Nuttal an Imperium Cicernus book last year that I never delivered on, I wanted to get another Witch Guard out last year and right now I’m adopting my neice and nephew in preparation for us all going back to the states in 2016. For which I need cash.
Sadly (or not heheheeh) the Admiral pays the best right now. So I’m bound and determined to put this next admiral book out as fast as possible and depending on how I’m feeling probably the next one as well. The Arc I’m on right now was originally envisioned as big enough for at least a two book arc and its definitely going to be two books the way I’m writing it right now, so unless I’m feeling burned out I want to get to the second half of the plot arc right away. All of which means probably two more Admiral books to both finish out the current arc I’m working on as well as line up some money: Admiral Invincible (just out in Jan), Admiral’s War part 1 (maybe out may), Admiral’s War part 2. Then I’ll have time to work on either a Witch Guard or an Imperium Cicirnus book or…. (I’ve had book ideas for several new magic series I’ve wanted to work on) there is also my very much long lamented first novel that stalled out at 60k words written and was never completed: tentatively titled Military Inset which is totally a space based Put Them Down, Imperial setting Sci-Fi book.
So choices-choices. And the only way to get them out the door is just to sit down and write them!
The Deposed King